יום רביעי, 7 בנובמבר 2012

Mr. Know-All

The story takes place on a ship, which is traveling from San Francisco to Japan, after World War 1. On that ship there are the two main characters that share a cabin - The narrator and Mr. Kelada. The narrator is a proud Englishman from The British Empire who disliked whoever is not British. Mr. Kelada is also British, probably from a colony which England conquered according to his skin color, and a very friendly man.

The narrator is, probably, a white skinny man who has short hair(a typical British man). He is an arrogant, querulous man, who likes his solitude. He disliked Mr. Kelada before he even met him, because according to his name the narrator decided he's not British. The narrator doesn't like to talk very much, only when necessary, and believes that during meal time it should be quiet. He's not friendly and throughout the whole story he makes racist comments and feels superior to those who aren't pure British. He likes formality, believes that strangers should put "Mr." when they address him, and thinks that a gentleman shouldn't be pushy and sticky. He judges everyone before he really knows them according to their appearance and behavior.

However, Mr. Kelada is the complete opposite to the narrator, and everything he does annoy him. Mr. Kelada is a short and dark-skinned man, with a sturdy build. He has long, curly, black hair, a flashy nose, big liquid eyes and white teeth. He is probably a rich man, since he travels a lot (according to the labels on his suitcases). He is a very friendly guy (he knew everyone on board in 3 days!), chatty, energetic, uses no formality - which annoys the narrator very much. He did card tricks even though the narrator told him he hates them, and joins the narrator everywhere he goes. He is so naive and doesn't understand that the narrator dislikes him. He runs everything on the ship - from sweeps to a fancy-dress ball, and is a good mixer. He is most "intolerable", according to the narrator, at mealtimes - he is hearty, jovial and loquacious. He knows everything, and he's never wrong. He likes to argue with anyone who disagrees with him until he proves them wrong. That's why the passengers called him "Mr. Know-All".

To sum up, we can see that the two main characters are completely different and has almost nothing in common, except that they are both British. Mr. Kelada annoys the narrator in every possible way.
I like Mr. Kelada better than the narrator because the narrator is too arrogant and judges everyone like he's superior to them and flawless, and Mr. Kelada is just trying to be friendly and nice. I'm sure he's not that worse as the narrator describes him.

Good comparison, although you need to correct your grammar mistakes.
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Daphna

יום חמישי, 4 באוקטובר 2012

Post Reading Activity - Diary Entry

Day 1 :
                                                                                                                                19.7.2007

Dear Diary,

It's Saturday morning. I woke up earlier than I'm used  to, and actually felt awake. I looked out of the window and saw it was a great day to go on a trip with my dad and my brother. I woke them up with some loud music on the stereo and they started to shout at me. I shared my idea of a trip with my father, who as an ultimate fan of trips, agreed right away.

We had breakfast and headed up north to a river (which I forgot it's name) together with my father's friends and their children. When we got there, I noticed one of the kids, named Eli, was depressed, so I went to talk to him and dragged him with me to the other kids. We all jumped to the water and started a "splash fight", while the grownups were grilling the food. We all ate very well after we played a lot. I saw Eli felt much better according to his big smile on his face.

It was getting dark, and we all got tired, our parents decided we should return home. We were tired, but happy. I fell asleep in the back of the car, knowing I cheered up someone today. I felt proud of myself.

Day 2 :
                                                                                                                               27.1.2011

Dear Diary,

Today I didn't go to school. It was cold and dark because of the clouds, which covered the sun. I didn't want to get up and leave my warm bed. When I finally got up, It started to rain. My mom was already at work so she couldn't drive me to school, and since it's far from my house, I have to ride my bicycle to reach it. So I decided to stay home today, and curled up in my bed again.

I woke up to the sound of the ringing door. It was my little brother, who came back from school. He looked at me and started talking, like always. I told him I had a headache to keep him quiet, and went back to my room to listen to music. I wasn't in the mood to talk to anyone.

My mom came back from work, and started to make dinner. I got hungry so I finally left my room to eat the dinner with my brother and mother. When I finished I told her I would do the dishes later, and guess what? That's right, I went back to my room. I closed the door and lay on my bed, started thinking how this day was so wasted and that I did nothing that made anyone feel better. I concluded that in order to make up for the lost day I should stop being lazy and start helping people or make them laugh or even smile, and I'll start by doing the dishes.

Excellent
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Daphna

יום רביעי, 19 בספטמבר 2012

Count That Day Lost - Bridging Text and Context

Mary Ann Evans was born in the 19th century, in Victorian England. The Victorian age was characterized by huge gaps between the classes. Evans was a female writer, who published her works under the pen name George Eliot, since female writers were not taken seriously at the time. 

In my opinion, Marry Ann's background helped me to understand the meaning behind her poem "Count That Day Lost". The poem talks about how people should spend their day by doing things that help other people. At her time, society was divided into classes. The lower class, which lived in extreme poverty, and upper class, that lived a life of luxury. She wanted to improve the society and overcome the gaps between the classes by encouraging people to be nice and kind to each other.

In addition, Marry Ann often criticized the behavior of the upper classes in her books. She thought that people should take responsibility in their everyday lives and was concerned with the moral choices they must make. You can see her concerns in the poem - "No act so small, that helped some soul and nothing cost - Then count that day as worse than lost". She was trying to make a difference - social equality between the upper class and lower class and between men and women

In conclusion, Mary Ann's background reveals the meaning of "Count That Day Lost". The poem symbolizes the change she wants to make and refers to everyone, regardless of class or sex, saying people should manage their time to help each other and do things not only for themselves, and by that improve the society.

Excellent work.
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Daphna

יום שני, 3 בספטמבר 2012

The Road Not Taken - Pre-reading (situation number 1)

My friends are going to travel abroad after graduation and they really want me to join them. However, I have been offered a fantastic job at a big high-tech company and I'm afraid that if I miss this opportunity, I may not get another one.

On the one hand, I'd really want to travel with my friends and explore the world. I have always wanted to view the "Niagara Falls" and travel in South-America, to observe other cultures and try other lifestyles. In that trip, I can do anything I have ever wanted along with my closest friends. It would be an experience of a lifetime. However, I would come back from the trip with no money at all and end up without a job. 

On the other hand, this job offer is an opportunity that may not come back. I can start working at a big office with a "fat" paycheck - my dream job! If I use my time right and start working now, by the time my friends come back from the trip, I might even be a CEO or a very important man in the company. But what if I don't even like my job after a couple of months and I miss the trip of my life.

To sum up, each decision has it's own pros and cons, but eventually what I choose is the important one. In my opinion, the trip is a lifetime experience that I have to go through and try all the things I've ever wanted to do before I start my life. I will get other job offers if I got this one, and I'll never regret my decision. We only live once.

Great work!
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